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Tuesday, Nov. 1, 2011. W-up. Write a thesis statement about you….Who are you? How were you crafted? 1) Peer Edit 2) Peer Conference 3) Begin re-writing.

HW Bring PRINTED VERSION IN CLASS FOR PEER EDIT#2

Thursday, Nov. 3, 2011 W-up: What is one character trait you want to develop about yourself at this point in your life? Why? 1) Peer Edit #2 - Happy Highlights 2) Peer Conference 3) RE-write HW Submit to teacher for final feedback by end of day
 * Green: Thesis + all topic sentences **
 * Pink: Textual evidence **
 * Yellow: Linkage to theme **
 * Looking at the Highlights what 3 things can you suggest to make the colors more harmonious! **